“老师总说我写得太口语化，缺乏学术风格。”
“脑子有观点，但不知道怎么写出来。”
“开头不会写，结尾总是太敷衍。”
“英语母语同学用的那种句子，我也想掌握！”
写好Essay不仅是语言问题，更是逻辑表达的问题。许多优秀的学术论文都有固定的结构模式和表达模板，尤其适用于非母语的留学生进行内容组织与表达提升。
Introduction（引言段）
引出背景（背景描述）
明确核心话题（问题定义）
给出中心论点 Thesis Statement
Body Paragraphs（正文段）
主观点句（Topic Sentence）
支撑论据 + 例子 + 解释
小结或过渡到下一段
Conclusion（结尾段）
重述论点
总结逻辑
呼应现实意义或延伸观点
“In recent years, the issue of [话题] has sparked considerable debate.”
“The purpose of this essay is to explore/examine/analyze…”
“This paper aims to argue that…”
“It is widely acknowledged that…”
“This essay will argue that [核心观点], by evaluating [三个论据].”
“While some may believe that..., this paper contends that…”
“Despite various perspectives, the position taken in this essay is that…”
“One major reason why [主张] is valid lies in…”
“An important aspect to consider is…”
“Firstly/Secondly/Finally, it is essential to note that…”
“For example, according to a study conducted by Smith (2020), …”
“This can be illustrated by the case of…”
“A relevant illustration of this is…”
“However, this viewpoint is challenged by…”
“On the contrary, it could be argued that…”
“Despite this, many scholars maintain that…”
“As argued by [Author, Year], …”
“Research conducted by [Author] reveals that…”
“This is supported by the theory of…”
“In summary, this section has demonstrated that…”
“Having examined this point, the next section will address…”
“Therefore, it is evident that…”
“In conclusion, this essay has shown that…”
“To summarize, the arguments presented support the view that…”
“Ultimately, the evidence suggests that…”
“It is recommended that future policies/efforts focus on…”
| 普通词 | 替换为更学术的词汇 |
|---|---|
| Think | Argue / Assert / Contend |
| Show | Demonstrate / Illustrate / Reveal |
| Bad | Detrimental / Adverse / Unfavorable |
| Good | Beneficial / Advantageous / Favorable |
| People | Individuals / Stakeholders / Scholars |
| Big | Significant / Substantial / Considerable |
🎯 小贴士：Academic writing 应避免使用 I / You / a lot / really / very / kind of 等主观或模糊口语词。
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